Talk:Julius Kingsley/@comment-44997843-20200815093124/@comment-27492705-20200816202322

I mean your changes to the lyrics makes less sense than the original in regard to Julius and doesn't match the beats of the song. Your changes don't have the same syllables as the original song, which makes it, if actually sung, sound (to be blunt) bad. Also it takes up a lot of space. You didn't have to put like a table in there when you could just type out your lyrics?

Breakdown: an analysis or classification of something; division into parts, categories, processes, etc.

Pretty much I mean an analysis in comparison to how it relates to Julius. Like, tell you how each verse or line fits Julius as a character.

Also I reckon you haven't watched Akito yet, so why did you try to make a fan parody about a character you don't even know?